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Kim Hardy's avatar

This is so good!

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Cole Noble's avatar

I like that two other writers decided “Yeah, this Rob kid is kind of a jerk,” and you just leaned into it 😂 Fantastic add

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Caitriana NicNeacail's avatar

Yeah, I thought it would be fun to flesh him out a little bit more, and have him (hopefully) learn a lesson along the way

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Bridget Riley's avatar

This is SO GOOD! I literally couldn’t stop reading! It’s the kind of story where you know, or at least have a good guess of, what’s happening, but you have to keep reading to find out what’s going on under the surface. Such a fun read!

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Caitriana NicNeacail's avatar

Thanks! 😊

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