You've got a great way of connecting words and layout. The images and story work really well together. It's a really nice touch. I love it. And then there are those sentences that pop, like little red spots on a canvas. Nice read. :)
'Pa doesn’t like me singing these songs at home, that’s why I’m out here half the time.' I am referencing part 2 here, I realise. Had to share it because some things in this story are completely unexpected, and I love it. Very good.
You've got a great way of connecting words and layout. The images and story work really well together. It's a really nice touch. I love it. And then there are those sentences that pop, like little red spots on a canvas. Nice read. :)
Thank you! 😊 really glad you enjoyed it!
I really enjoyed this!
'Pa doesn’t like me singing these songs at home, that’s why I’m out here half the time.' I am referencing part 2 here, I realise. Had to share it because some things in this story are completely unexpected, and I love it. Very good.
Haha! Yeah, that guy kind of took me by surprise too 😆
Love it. I love the crossover of worlds too.
More, please!
Glad you enjoyed it! Stay tuned for Part 2 next week!
I read it, but quickly. I'll read it again later when I get home and I'll comment!