This so far captures one of my favorite things in space travel scifi: The intense claustrophobia that comes with it. Something I find particularly interesting about this so far is it captures the social claustrophobia!
The prose in this chapter was so lovely! Even the bad trip on the space shrooms was beautifully written. I enjoyed getting a little more of a peek into Quill’s backstory, and I can’t wait for more!
Also, I viscerally felt the awkwardness of some of Quill’s interactions, which I think is a great sign that you’re putting the reader right into the story with him!
This so far captures one of my favorite things in space travel scifi: The intense claustrophobia that comes with it. Something I find particularly interesting about this so far is it captures the social claustrophobia!
The prose in this chapter was so lovely! Even the bad trip on the space shrooms was beautifully written. I enjoyed getting a little more of a peek into Quill’s backstory, and I can’t wait for more!
Also, I viscerally felt the awkwardness of some of Quill’s interactions, which I think is a great sign that you’re putting the reader right into the story with him!
Thank you so much!! That means A LOT, especially from such a master of characterization as yourself!!