Oh, niice. I didn't even catch the football at first, thought the pickleball reference struck me as odd. Now I understand. This went in a different direction than I expected and I love it!
Nice twist - take some doing in flash fiction - I re-read the American football thing thinking it was an error.... It turns out it was... so it made me feel clever and enjoy the story... excellent manipulation of readers' expectations.
brilliant!
Thanks! 😊
Oh, niice. I didn't even catch the football at first, thought the pickleball reference struck me as odd. Now I understand. This went in a different direction than I expected and I love it!
Thank you! 😊
Nice twist - take some doing in flash fiction - I re-read the American football thing thinking it was an error.... It turns out it was... so it made me feel clever and enjoy the story... excellent manipulation of readers' expectations.
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! 😊
well......sums it up nicely. Retirement?
Thanks for reading and commenting, glad you enjoyed it!