This is just beautiful work. The pacing and tension are all perfect. Taut. You unspool enough little details at a time to let the reader in, without hitting him or her over the head. And, philosophically, I love the message too. Wonderful!
Wow, thank you!! 😊 so glad you enjoyed it! I always struggle a bit with knowing how much to explain to the reader(my sister, my most honest critic, sometimes tells me things are too unclear) without over-expounding, so I’m really happy it worked here!
What a fun read! Thank you for sharing!
Thank you for reading!! Glad you enjoyed it! ☺️
Awesome story. Very well done.
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!! 😊
This is just beautiful work. The pacing and tension are all perfect. Taut. You unspool enough little details at a time to let the reader in, without hitting him or her over the head. And, philosophically, I love the message too. Wonderful!
Wow, thank you!! 😊 so glad you enjoyed it! I always struggle a bit with knowing how much to explain to the reader(my sister, my most honest critic, sometimes tells me things are too unclear) without over-expounding, so I’m really happy it worked here!
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Thank you Kim! 😁 glad you enjoyed it!!
You developed the prompt beautifully, well done! I'm in awe of your imagination.
Thank you Portia! Glad you liked it, I wasn’t sure it fully satisfied the prompt but I enjoyed writing it