Very accurate, I'd say. Pity it's not happening already, that sort of resistance. I very much fear it shall be far too late by the time people are motivated to resist. 'and then they came for me...' that sort of thing. The people in control are very clever like that, after all - working their way around the edges first.
This is just beautiful work. The pacing and tension are all perfect. Taut. You unspool enough little details at a time to let the reader in, without hitting him or her over the head. And, philosophically, I love the message too. Wonderful!
Wow, thank you!! 😊 so glad you enjoyed it! I always struggle a bit with knowing how much to explain to the reader(my sister, my most honest critic, sometimes tells me things are too unclear) without over-expounding, so I’m really happy it worked here!
What a fun read! Thank you for sharing!
Thank you for reading!! Glad you enjoyed it! ☺️
Very accurate, I'd say. Pity it's not happening already, that sort of resistance. I very much fear it shall be far too late by the time people are motivated to resist. 'and then they came for me...' that sort of thing. The people in control are very clever like that, after all - working their way around the edges first.
Awesome story. Very well done.
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!! 😊
This is just beautiful work. The pacing and tension are all perfect. Taut. You unspool enough little details at a time to let the reader in, without hitting him or her over the head. And, philosophically, I love the message too. Wonderful!
Wow, thank you!! 😊 so glad you enjoyed it! I always struggle a bit with knowing how much to explain to the reader(my sister, my most honest critic, sometimes tells me things are too unclear) without over-expounding, so I’m really happy it worked here!
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Thank you Kim! 😁 glad you enjoyed it!!
You developed the prompt beautifully, well done! I'm in awe of your imagination.
Thank you Portia! Glad you liked it, I wasn’t sure it fully satisfied the prompt but I enjoyed writing it