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Randall Hayes's avatar

I see what you did there with "Asaph". I thought it was a cool name, too, and used it for a ship.

https://randallhayes.substack.com/p/jamestown-2107-482

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Rachel LaDue's avatar

Wow loved this concept and you did a fantastic job putting it to good use in this story! I enjoyed the overall questioning one’s sanity feel, that was well drawn with the maybe unreliable narrator with his attendant suspicions that may be reasonable but could turn out to be paranoia. Also that thing about psychoflage--first I’ve heard the term and it’s such a cool concept all by itself. Desperately want backstory on what the military’s comparatively weak sauce psychoflage tech is. Also, I’m probably reading too much into Hippocrates--the moment a midwestern drawl came out of that box I was suspicious, then when its avatar was specifically designed to be soothing doctor visage, I lost all faith in him. Hippocrates is a dispatched minion piece of the overall psychoflage, right?!

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