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Rosalind Stanley's avatar

Your language is always so breathtaking, Caitriana! I also started wondering if they were people somewhere near the beginning and kept trying not to picture them that way. And then I was vindicated, haha.

Something chilling about that last line...

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L.L. Ford's avatar

~Spoilers if people look at comments before reading~

I had a moment within a few paragraphs where I was trying to imagine the specimen, and something in my mind went "I'd be really easily to visualize if the specimen were just people"

and then I started kicking myself because I started picturing them that way and I was like "oh no, I ruined the visualization of the story!"

And then as I read I went "wait..."

"Wait..."

"WAIT!!!"

Anyways, very awesome story, absolutely love it!

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